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Wow! I really have to say wow! I expected no less from the author, but I sure wasn't expecting such a great story with only a few chapters. This story traps you from the very beginning and it takes you for a ride with three of the most interesting characters I have seen in anime/manga stories. The plot twists here are superb. You don't expect some things to happen, and yet they do just when you thought they were going cliché.
ReplyDeleteI loved this story, I loved Grace and Giselle, the two counterparts, and Mordoll is a wonderful villain. This book kept me reading until the end, I read it in one day and couldn't stop because I was very thrilled with it.
I only have one complaint: I WANT MORE! I want to know what happened to Giselle at the end! I know the ending is open to the reader's interpretation and conclusion, but this story is sooo good it left me hanging from a tree.
Congratulations!
Great story! Had me reading all the way till the end. I wish it could have been longer, but then again I guess that wouldn't be fair Giselle, lol.
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So what really happened to her at the end? Did she die? Mordoll said, or hinted at least, that she and the game were the same (I kinda got that idea), so she was finally set free at the end? It looks that way. But I'm guessing she destroyed the device and therefore destroyed herself, so she died and was freed.
i dont think she died, im thinking the end is as it is, which is: she destroyed the thing and the city disappeared with the snow and all and then maybe she went back to reality, but we dont see that so maybe she liberated the city from its curse and it went back to normal with her and all.
DeleteI re-read some parts and I agree with you; I don't think she died, but we are left with unknown answers after all. I want to think she broke the curse and ended the game, but I can't. I choose to think she realized she was the game, and it was sort of a nightmare she could never wake up from, so she turned it into a dream. Or maybe she was dead to start with. Who knows?
DeleteMy favourite part was the afternoon delight scene. Skyyyyyyyy rockets in flight, this while Mordoll brutally slashes her to death. And what Grace says at the end..
ReplyDeleteoh god, it was awesome, pure genius.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ws0VfqkhFc
DeleteChopin's Nocturne:
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Story 8/10
ReplyDeleteCharacters 10/10
Pacing 9/10
Ending 9/10
I salute you. Thank you for sharing this story.